Re: [Dcrup] [taugh.com-standards] Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dcrup-dkim-crypto-12

"John R. Levine" <johnl@iecc.com> Wed, 20 June 2018 19:45 UTC

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From: "John R. Levine" <johnl@iecc.com>
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Cc: Pete Resnick <presnick@qti.qualcomm.com>, General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>, dcrup@ietf.org, draft-ietf-dcrup-dkim-crypto.all@ietf.org, rsalz@akamai.com, Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, alexey.melnikov@isode.com, ben@nostrum.com, adam@nostrum.com, Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>, fenton@bluepopcorn.net
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> Pete, thanks for your review. I think the whole point of chartering DCRUP was to produce documents such as this.
> John, thanks for updating to reference RFC 8174, although I agree with Adam that the boilerplate should match 8174.

It's fixed in the copy I have here, waiting to see what other nits to 
fix show up in LC before posting the final.

By the way, there are comments in the XML pointing out the stuff to 
remove, which have been there all along.

R's,
John