Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

Thanks. Will update.

- Jouni

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> On Mar 10, 2017, at 9:59 PM, Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu> wrote:
> 
> Jouni,
> 
> Nit picking
> 
> LSR stands for Label Switching Router
>                           ^^^
> 
> In the terminology section and section 4.2.
> 
> I think PREF and FREF should go into terminology section.
> 
> /Loa
> 
> On 2017-03-11 04:22, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
>> Thanks.
>> 
>>> On Mar 10, 2017, at 10:01 AM, János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Jouni,
>>> 
>>> I've made some changes to the draft. The attached pdf indicates them.
>>> I've updated the xml version where you moved Balazs' text to be main text. I hope i did not mess xml versioning.
>>> (the commented pdf is one version earlier)
>> 
>> Nope. I rebased my ongoing edits to yours so everything is fine. Nothing git cannot do ;)
>> 
>> 
>>> Well, I did not make any dramatic change.
>>> I'd highlight two:
>>> a) replaced "data plane protocol" with "data plane solution". We are working on solution as reflected by "sol" in the file name ;-). I mean, a protocol is rather above the data plane, e.g., in the control plane.
>>> b) replaced "domain" with alternatives. DetNet is for single domain. Actually, domain is an overloaded term: administrative domain, etc., better to avoid.
>> 
>> Ack.
>> 
>>> I highlighted one thing in the pdw, which I did not implement in the xml:
>>> "frame replication and elimination"
>>> The architecture document uses "packet replication and elimination", which I think would be better to be used in this doc too; except for he cases when we explicitly refer to 802.1CB.
>>> This appears multiple places, another variant: ""frame replication and duplicate elimination".
>>> If there is agreement then we could make the change.
>> 
>> Let’s go for the arch doc way. So “Packet Replication and Elimination for Redundancy” (PREF) ?
>> 
>> - Jouni
>> 
>> 
>>> 
>>> Regards,
>>> Janos
>>> 
>>> 
>>> On 3/10/2017 5:55 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
>>>> Folks,
>>>> 
>>>> I did quite a bit of updates to the draft. All in GitHub. I’ll continue writing over the weekend etc..
>>>> 
>>>> - Jouni
>>>> 
>>>> 
>>> 
>>> <draft-dt-detnet-dp-sol-00 - 2017-03-10-JF-comments.pdf>
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