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Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Some additional minor comments

Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Tue, 27 June 2017 15:22 UTC

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From: Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano <cjbc@it.uc3m.es>
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Done for the minor changes.

If time permits and you consider it useful, I can try to give it a try
at doing a new figure for Annex A.

Thanks,

Carlos

On Tue, 2017-06-27 at 08:26 +0300, Jouni wrote:
> Feel free to edit into the master ;)
> 
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Detnet-dp-dt [mailto:detnet-dp-dt-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
> > Of
> > Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano
> > Sent: Tuesday, June 27, 2017 02:04 AM
> > To: Detnet-dp-dt@ietf.org
> > Subject: [Detnet-dp-dt] Some additional minor comments
> > 
> > Hi,
> > 
> > Some additional typos:
> > 
> > - "Addition service definitions" --> "Additional service
> > definitions".
> > - "The traffic control mechanisms used to deliver QoS for IP
> > encapsulated DetNet flows is expected to be defined in a future
> > document"
> > --> "The traffic control mechanisms used to deliver QoS for IP
> > encapsulated DetNet flows are expected to be defined in a future
> > document"
> > - "data plan" --> "data plane"
> > - "MPLS defines a point-to-point co-routed bidirectional LSP is a
> > point-
> > to-point" --> "MPLS defines a point-to-point co- routed
> > bidirectional LSP
> > as a point-to-point"
> > 
> > And minor comments/questions:
> > 
> > - Figure 1 needs to be introduced.
> > - In Section 7.4, why did we remove mentioning MPLS-TP as one
> > example to
> > create co-routed bidirectional LSPs?
> > - Shouldn't we put back a figure in Appendix A? I can try to draft
> > one.
> > 
> > Thanks,
> > 
> > Carlos
> > 
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