Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

Jouni Korhonen <jouni.korhonen@broadcom.com> Sat, 11 March 2017 19:35 UTC

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FREF has been now replaced by PREF in the document.

- Jouni


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> On Mar 11, 2017, at 4:35 AM, Jiangyuanlong <jiangyuanlong@huawei.com> wrote:
> 
> "Packet Replication and Elimination for Redundancy" (PRER) , it seems PRER makes more sense in MPLS than FRER.
> 
> Cheers,
> Yuanlong
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Detnet-dp-dt [mailto:detnet-dp-dt-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Jouni Korhonen
> Sent: Saturday, March 11, 2017 4:23 AM
> To: Janos Farkas
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> Subject: Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github
> 
> Thanks.
> 
>> On Mar 10, 2017, at 10:01 AM, János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Jouni,
>> 
>> I've made some changes to the draft. The attached pdf indicates them.
>> I've updated the xml version where you moved Balazs' text to be main text. I hope i did not mess xml versioning.
>> (the commented pdf is one version earlier)
> 
> Nope. I rebased my ongoing edits to yours so everything is fine. Nothing git cannot do ;)
> 
> 
>> Well, I did not make any dramatic change.
>> I'd highlight two:
>> a) replaced "data plane protocol" with "data plane solution". We are working on solution as reflected by "sol" in the file name ;-). I mean, a protocol is rather above the data plane, e.g., in the control plane.
>> b) replaced "domain" with alternatives. DetNet is for single domain. Actually, domain is an overloaded term: administrative domain, etc., better to avoid.
> 
> Ack.
> 
>> I highlighted one thing in the pdw, which I did not implement in the xml:
>> "frame replication and elimination"
>> The architecture document uses "packet replication and elimination", which I think would be better to be used in this doc too; except for he cases when we explicitly refer to 802.1CB.
>> This appears multiple places, another variant: ""frame replication and duplicate elimination".
>> If there is agreement then we could make the change.
> 
> Let’s go for the arch doc way. So “Packet Replication and Elimination for Redundancy” (PREF) ?
> 
> - Jouni
> 
> 
>> 
>> Regards,
>> Janos
>> 
>> 
>> On 3/10/2017 5:55 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
>>> Folks,
>>> 
>>> I did quite a bit of updates to the draft. All in GitHub. I’ll continue writing over the weekend etc..
>>> 
>>> - Jouni
>>> 
>>> 
>> 
>> <draft-dt-detnet-dp-sol-00 - 2017-03-10-JF-comments.pdf>
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