Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] check the dp dt draft "comment style"..

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Thu, 31 August 2017 19:07 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] check the dp dt draft "comment style"..
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Thanks!
On 08/31/2017 02:28 PM, Jouni wrote:
> Ack. I’ll put that down.
> 
> - JOuni
> 
> 
>> On 31 Aug 2017, at 21:25, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>; wrote:
>>
>> Hi Jouni,
>>
>>     I don't see the comment that "EVPN encapsulation should be
>> considered as an alternative to PWs" captured.  Perhaps before or after
>> comment 3.
>>
>> Lou
>>
>> On 8/27/2017 6:13 PM, Jouni wrote:
>>> Folks,
>>>
>>> Check the initial test with comments included (only abstract & intro so
>>> far). Is the style OK or do you want some other arrangement for the
>>> comments? Now they follow closely Stewart's review on the mailing list. We
>>> could group comments at the end of each section also? 
>>>
>>> Comments? Preferences?
>>>
>>> - Jouni
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> This body part will be downloaded on demand.
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