Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

Jouni,

Nit picking

LSR stands for Label Switching Router
                            ^^^

In the terminology section and section 4.2.

I think PREF and FREF should go into terminology section.

/Loa

On 2017-03-11 04:22, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
> Thanks.
>
>> On Mar 10, 2017, at 10:01 AM, János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Jouni,
>>
>> I've made some changes to the draft. The attached pdf indicates them.
>> I've updated the xml version where you moved Balazs' text to be main text. I hope i did not mess xml versioning.
>> (the commented pdf is one version earlier)
>
> Nope. I rebased my ongoing edits to yours so everything is fine. Nothing git cannot do ;)
>
>
>> Well, I did not make any dramatic change.
>> I'd highlight two:
>> a) replaced "data plane protocol" with "data plane solution". We are working on solution as reflected by "sol" in the file name ;-). I mean, a protocol is rather above the data plane, e.g., in the control plane.
>> b) replaced "domain" with alternatives. DetNet is for single domain. Actually, domain is an overloaded term: administrative domain, etc., better to avoid.
>
> Ack.
>
>> I highlighted one thing in the pdw, which I did not implement in the xml:
>> "frame replication and elimination"
>> The architecture document uses "packet replication and elimination", which I think would be better to be used in this doc too; except for he cases when we explicitly refer to 802.1CB.
>> This appears multiple places, another variant: ""frame replication and duplicate elimination".
>> If there is agreement then we could make the change.
>
> Let’s go for the arch doc way. So “Packet Replication and Elimination for Redundancy” (PREF) ?
>
> - Jouni
>
>
>>
>> Regards,
>> Janos
>>
>>
>> On 3/10/2017 5:55 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
>>> Folks,
>>>
>>> I did quite a bit of updates to the draft. All in GitHub. I’ll continue writing over the weekend etc..
>>>
>>> - Jouni
>>>
>>>
>>
>> <draft-dt-detnet-dp-sol-00 - 2017-03-10-JF-comments.pdf>
>
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