Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

Hi János,

Just one comment about "domain" below. 

On Fri, 2017-03-10 at 19:01 +0100, János Farkas wrote:
> Hi Jouni,
> 
> I've made some changes to the draft. The attached pdf indicates them.
> I've updated the xml version where you moved Balazs' text to be main 
> text. I hope i did not mess xml versioning.
> (the commented pdf is one version earlier)
> 
> Well, I did not make any dramatic change.
> I'd highlight two:
> a) replaced "data plane protocol" with "data plane solution". We are 
> working on solution as reflected by "sol" in the file name ;-). I
> mean, 
> a protocol is rather above the data plane, e.g., in the control
> plane.
> b) replaced "domain" with alternatives. DetNet is for single domain. 
> Actually, domain is an overloaded term: administrative domain, etc., 
> better to avoid.

I agree with you. I made some editorial changes before to align with
the draft-ietf-detnet-architecture document, where "DetNet domain" is
used. But I've checked again and it's true that domain is merely used
in the terminology section and not really in the text. Norm, maybe you
can consider removing "DetNet domain" from the arch document
(terminology section) so both docs are consistent.

I'm reviewing the draft. I'll soon send some updates (I expect them to
be just minor things/editorial).

Thanks,

Carlos

> 
> I highlighted one thing in the pdw, which I did not implement in the
> xml:
> "frame replication and elimination"
> The architecture document uses "packet replication and elimination", 
> which I think would be better to be used in this doc too; except for
> he 
> cases when we explicitly refer to 802.1CB.
> This appears multiple places, another variant: ""frame replication
> and 
> duplicate elimination".
> If there is agreement then we could make the change.
> 
> Regards,
> Janos
> 
> 
> On 3/10/2017 5:55 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
> > Folks,
> > 
> > I did quite a bit of updates to the draft. All in GitHub. I’ll
> > continue writing over the weekend etc..
> > 
> > - Jouni
> > 
> > 
> 
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