Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Sat, 11 March 2017 14:49 UTC

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Hi,

I've just committed some changes, mostly editorial, though I've also
added a couple of comments in the xml (you can look for "<!-- CJBC:" to
easily find them). One refers to Figures 2 & 3: there we have DF1, DF2,
DF3 and DF4, but aren't we referring to the same flow there (being
replicated and merged)?

Thanks,

Carlos

On Thu, 2017-03-09 at 20:55 -0800, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
> Folks,
> 
> I did quite a bit of updates to the draft. All in GitHub. I’ll
> continue writing over the weekend etc..
> 
> - Jouni
> 
>