Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

[János Farkas <[e-mail]>]

Hi Jouni,

I've made some changes to the draft. The attached pdf indicates them.
I've updated the xml version where you moved Balazs' text to be main 
text. I hope i did not mess xml versioning.
(the commented pdf is one version earlier)

Well, I did not make any dramatic change.
I'd highlight two:
a) replaced "data plane protocol" with "data plane solution". We are 
working on solution as reflected by "sol" in the file name ;-). I mean, 
a protocol is rather above the data plane, e.g., in the control plane.
b) replaced "domain" with alternatives. DetNet is for single domain. 
Actually, domain is an overloaded term: administrative domain, etc., 
better to avoid.

I highlighted one thing in the pdw, which I did not implement in the xml:
"frame replication and elimination"
The architecture document uses "packet replication and elimination", 
which I think would be better to be used in this doc too; except for he 
cases when we explicitly refer to 802.1CB.
This appears multiple places, another variant: ""frame replication and 
duplicate elimination".
If there is agreement then we could make the change.

Regards,
Janos


On 3/10/2017 5:55 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
> Folks,
>
> I did quite a bit of updates to the draft. All in GitHub. I’ll continue writing over the weekend etc..
>
> - Jouni
>
>