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Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

Jouni Korhonen <jouni.korhonen@broadcom.com> Fri, 10 March 2017 17:25 UTC

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Balazs,


> On Mar 10, 2017, at 4:32 AM, Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Jouni,
> 
> Good progress. 
> 
> I have updated the "xml" on GitHub, however all proposed changes are 
> commented out. Remove old text and delete comment mark if You are 
> fine with the changes. You can find them by looking for "<!—VB"


Thanks.

> 
> My comments in addition to Loa's ones:
> - Terminology section (PW Label): text was somewhat misleading. I have 
> changed it to " A PseudoWire label that is used to identify DetNet flow 
> related PW Instances within a PE node. “

Much better.

I was also thinking that while most of the text is really only in DetNet context all existing MS-PW functionality is still there. Maybe we should emphasize this somewhere in the introduction that DetNet does not preclude using the same infra for the “traditional” use as well.


> - Figure 2.: Text refers to "X" on figure as replication and elimination point. 
> I have found somewhat confusing to have 2 pieces of "X" in x-PE nodes
> for the highlighted DetNet flow. I have modified the figure to have 
> single "X" per x-PE node.

Good point. I changed these.


> - paragraph above Figure3: some editorial changes + deleted L3VPN example 
> in the last sentence, as legacy L3VPNs would not allow "X" points e.g., on S-PE2.

Changed.

> 
> - Figure 3.: here we have double XX in S-PE2 node. Changed as in Figure2.

Changed.

> 
> - Figure 8/9.: in figure 2/3 we have use "X" to denote replication and elimination
> points, whereas in figure 8/9 a "*" is used. I have changed these figures to be 
> consequent with previous figures.

Changed.

- Jouni


> 
> Cheers
> Bala'zs
> 
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Detnet-dp-dt [mailto:detnet-dp-dt-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Jouni Korhonen
> Sent: Friday, March 10, 2017 5:55 AM
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> Subject: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github
> 
> Folks,
> 
> I did quite a bit of updates to the draft. All in GitHub. I’ll continue writing over the weekend etc..
> 
> - Jouni
> 
> 
> -- 
> Jouni Korhonen, Broadcom, Core Switching Group
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