[Detnet-dp-dt] Some additional minor comments
Carlos Jesús Bernardos Cano <cjbc@it.uc3m.es> Mon, 26 June 2017 23:04 UTC
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Subject: [Detnet-dp-dt] Some additional minor comments
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Hi, Some additional typos: - "Addition service definitions" --> "Additional service definitions". - "The traffic control mechanisms used to deliver QoS for IP encapsulated DetNet flows is expected to be defined in a future document" --> "The traffic control mechanisms used to deliver QoS for IP encapsulated DetNet flows are expected to be defined in a future document" - "data plan" --> "data plane" - "MPLS defines a point-to-point co-routed bidirectional LSP is a point-to-point" --> "MPLS defines a point-to-point co- routed bidirectional LSP as a point-to-point" And minor comments/questions: - Figure 1 needs to be introduced. - In Section 7.4, why did we remove mentioning MPLS-TP as one example to create co-routed bidirectional LSPs? - Shouldn't we put back a figure in Appendix A? I can try to draft one. Thanks, Carlos
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