Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

[Jouni Korhonen <[e-mail]>]

Thanks.

> On Mar 10, 2017, at 10:01 AM, János Farkas <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Hi Jouni,
> 
> I've made some changes to the draft. The attached pdf indicates them.
> I've updated the xml version where you moved Balazs' text to be main text. I hope i did not mess xml versioning.
> (the commented pdf is one version earlier)

Nope. I rebased my ongoing edits to yours so everything is fine. Nothing git cannot do ;)


> Well, I did not make any dramatic change.
> I'd highlight two:
> a) replaced "data plane protocol" with "data plane solution". We are working on solution as reflected by "sol" in the file name ;-). I mean, a protocol is rather above the data plane, e.g., in the control plane.
> b) replaced "domain" with alternatives. DetNet is for single domain. Actually, domain is an overloaded term: administrative domain, etc., better to avoid.

Ack.

> I highlighted one thing in the pdw, which I did not implement in the xml:
> "frame replication and elimination"
> The architecture document uses "packet replication and elimination", which I think would be better to be used in this doc too; except for he cases when we explicitly refer to 802.1CB.
> This appears multiple places, another variant: ""frame replication and duplicate elimination".
> If there is agreement then we could make the change.

Let’s go for the arch doc way. So “Packet Replication and Elimination for Redundancy” (PREF) ?

- Jouni


> 
> Regards,
> Janos
> 
> 
> On 3/10/2017 5:55 AM, Jouni Korhonen wrote:
>> Folks,
>> 
>> I did quite a bit of updates to the draft. All in GitHub. I’ll continue writing over the weekend etc..
>> 
>> - Jouni
>> 
>> 
> 
> <draft-dt-detnet-dp-sol-00 - 2017-03-10-JF-comments.pdf>