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Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com> Fri, 10 March 2017 12:32 UTC

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To: Jouni Korhonen <jouni.korhonen@broadcom.com>, "Detnet-dp-dt@ietf.org" <Detnet-dp-dt@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github
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Hi Jouni,

Good progress. 

I have updated the "xml" on GitHub, however all proposed changes are 
commented out. Remove old text and delete comment mark if You are 
fine with the changes. You can find them by looking for "<!--VB"

My comments in addition to Loa's ones:
- Terminology section (PW Label): text was somewhat misleading. I have 
changed it to " A PseudoWire label that is used to identify DetNet flow 
related PW Instances within a PE node. "

- Figure 2.: Text refers to "X" on figure as replication and elimination point. 
I have found somewhat confusing to have 2 pieces of "X" in x-PE nodes
for the highlighted DetNet flow. I have modified the figure to have 
single "X" per x-PE node.

- paragraph above Figure3: some editorial changes + deleted L3VPN example 
in the last sentence, as legacy L3VPNs would not allow "X" points e.g., on S-PE2.

- Figure 3.: here we have double XX in S-PE2 node. Changed as in Figure2.

- Figure 8/9.: in figure 2/3 we have use "X" to denote replication and elimination
points, whereas in figure 8/9 a "*" is used. I have changed these figures to be 
consequent with previous figures.

Cheers
Bala'zs


-----Original Message-----
From: Detnet-dp-dt [mailto:detnet-dp-dt-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Jouni Korhonen
Sent: Friday, March 10, 2017 5:55 AM
To: Detnet-dp-dt@ietf.org
Subject: [Detnet-dp-dt] Draft update in github

Folks,

I did quite a bit of updates to the draft. All in GitHub. I’ll continue writing over the weekend etc..

- Jouni


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