Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] check the dp dt draft "comment style"..

Jouni <jouni.nospam@gmail.com> Thu, 31 August 2017 18:28 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Detnet-dp-dt] check the dp dt draft "comment style"..
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Ack. I’ll put that down.

- JOuni


> On 31 Aug 2017, at 21:25, Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>; wrote:
> 
> Hi Jouni,
> 
>     I don't see the comment that "EVPN encapsulation should be
> considered as an alternative to PWs" captured.  Perhaps before or after
> comment 3.
> 
> Lou
> 
> On 8/27/2017 6:13 PM, Jouni wrote:
>> Folks,
>> 
>> Check the initial test with comments included (only abstract & intro so
>> far). Is the style OK or do you want some other arrangement for the
>> comments? Now they follow closely Stewart's review on the mailing list. We
>> could group comments at the end of each section also? 
>> 
>> Comments? Preferences?
>> 
>> - Jouni
>> 
>> 
>> 
>> This body part will be downloaded on demand.
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