Re: [Detnet] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn

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Subject: Re: [Detnet] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn
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Hi Loa,

Much thanks for your careful review!

I'll start Last Call and Balazs can update with other Last Call comments-
Deborah


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Subject: RE: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn

Hi Loa,
Many thanks for the review.
I will update the draft with your nits.
Thanks
Bala'zs

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Subject: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn

Hello,

I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. 
The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see ​ https://urldefense.com/v3/__http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir__;!!BhdT!35vD-FxC4uAPtiscZ_bjaDFiH5kENDtKEGWsNb-_QWKb8TIYMoh4LYdBobjY9Y4$ 

Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through discussion or by updating the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn
Reviewer: Loa Andersson
Review Date: date
IETF LC End Date: -
Intended Status: Informational

Summary:

No issues found. This document is ready for publication.

The draft is well and clearly written and addresses a real issue, the relationship between the MPLS layer flow and a TSN flow,

Major Issues:

No major issues found.

Minor Issues:
No minor issues found.
Nits:

I found very few nits, mostly typos and suggestion for the abbreviation list. The are included in included word file, the authors may use or discard as they want.

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Loa Andersson                        email: loa@pi.nu
Senior MPLS Expert                          loa.pi.nu@gmail.com
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