Re: [Detnet] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-pof-06

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From: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
To: Kyle Rose <krose@krose.org>, "tsv-art@ietf.org" <tsv-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-pof-06
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Hi Kyle,

thanks for the review. 

The intended RFC status was discussed by the WG. This draft describes node internal 
implementations. Other implementations may be possible with same external observable 
behavior.  This is why "informational" status was selected.

Thanks & Cheers
Bala'zs

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Subject: Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-pof-06

Reviewer: Kyle Rose
Review result: Ready

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the document's authors and WG to allow them to address any issues raised and also to the IETF discussion list for information.

When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should consider this review as part of the last-call comments they receive. Please always CC tsv-art@ietf.org if you reply to or forward this review.

This document is Ready to publish as an informational RFC.

Other reviewers (particularly Henning from rtgdir) adequately covered nits and minor issues. My one remaining question (perhaps answered in the past within the WG or on the mailing list) is why this and other documents describing proposed solutions within the DetNet problem space are being published as informational rather than as experimental or standards track.