[Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: (with COMMENT)

[Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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In Section 1, I believe "queuing" should be "queueing".

In Section 6, the sentence beginning "Notably" isn't a sentence.  I suggest:

OLD:

   Notably [RFC7510], as this document
   is primarily an application of MPLS-in-UDP.

NEW:

   Of particular note is [RFC7510], as this document
   is primarily an application of MPLS-in-UDP.