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Re: [Detnet] Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: (with COMMENT)

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From: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
To: Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Martin,

Many thanks for the comments. 
- NAT: in my understanding tsvart comment was resolved by adding a note to the end of chapter 5. 
(see my mail: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/detnet/Bl7A4-2DztDmFlxL56MED_5RexY/ )
- abstract: right, that sentence needs fixing
OLD TEXT
   The approach is modeled on the operation of MPLS and over 
   UDP/IP packet switched networks.
NEW TEXT
   The approach is based on the operation of MPLS-in-UDP 
   technology.
END

Many thanks
Bala'zs

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Subject: Martin Duke's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: (with COMMENT)

Martin Duke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Please address the tsvart review comment about NATs.

The sentence in the abstract that begins "The approach is..." is garbled.

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