[Detnet] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05

Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 05 February 2021 23:56 UTC

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Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-tsn-05
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2021-02-05
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05
IESG Telechat date: 2021-02-18

Summary:

This document specifies the Deterministic Networking MPLS data plane when
operating over a TSN sub-network.

I have some minor questions to the authors.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

- Page 5: Could you please describe what the "TSN treatment" comprise?
- Are the security considerations the same for TSN-unaware that are for
TSN-aware nodes? - How are the privacy considerations for those? It would be
nice to mention explicitly how or where (I-D.ietf-detnet-security???) the
privacy considerations are addressed for TSN-unaware and TSN-aware nodes

Thank you for this document

Ines.