Re: [Detnet] AD Review of draft-ietf-detnet-pof-04

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Tue, 07 November 2023 16:25 UTC

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
To: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>, "detnet@ietf.org" <detnet@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] AD Review of draft-ietf-detnet-pof-04
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Hi Bala’zs!



Thanks for the quick release of -05 to address my feedback.  More inline …



From: Balázs Varga A <balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com>
Sent: Tuesday, November 7, 2023 7:18 AM
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>; detnet@ietf.org
Subject: RE: AD Review of draft-ietf-detnet-pof-04

[snip]



3, “Section 4.3, Sequence number”

OK, text added:

NEW TEXT

    In general, the use of PREOF functions require sequencing information

    to be included in the packets of a DetNet compound flow.  This can be

    done by adding a sequence number as part of DetNet encapsulation

     [RFC8655].  Sequencing information is typically added once, at or

    close to the source.

END



[Roman] This text didn’t make it into the -05 draft.  Can you please merge it.



Thanks,

Roman