[Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 18 February 2021 06:31 UTC

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Subject: [Detnet] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: (with COMMENT)
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Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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In Section 2.2, you define "CW", but the term used in the document is actually
"d-CW".  "MPLS-TP", though defined here as well, is not present elsewhere in
the document.