Re: [Detnet] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-12: (with COMMENT)

János Farkas <janos.farkas@ericsson.com> Mon, 06 May 2019 14:19 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-12: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Mirja,

Revision 13 of the draft includes additional reference in Section 3.3.2: 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-13#section-3.3.2, 
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-13.

Thank you,
Janos


On 4/29/2019 2:28 PM, Janos Farkas wrote:
> Hi Mirja,
>
> Thank you!
>
> Based on our discussion it seems to be better to refer to AQM [RFC 7567] at the end of Section 3.3.2, e.g.,:
>
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> "Examples of such techniques include traffic policing and
>     shaping functions (e.g., [RFC2475]), separating flows into per-
>     flow rate-limited queues, and potentially apply active queue management [RFC 7567].”
>
> Regards,
> Janos
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Mirja Kühlewind via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
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> Subject: Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-12: (with COMMENT)
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> Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-detnet-architecture-12: No Objection
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> Thanks for addressing my discuss. One more minor comment: I see the reference to bufferbloat in section 3.2.1.1, however, I guess the reference would actually be even more need in section 3.3.2.
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> I agree with Alexey and Benjamin that this document should be informational.
> Informational documents can also have IETF consensus, so that cannot be the reason to go for PS. However, this document does not specify a protocol or any requirements that are mandatory to implement for interoperability and therefore should not be PS.
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