[Detnet] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-detnet-pof-06

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Thu, 16 November 2023 16:49 UTC

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Subject: [Detnet] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-detnet-pof-06
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
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Document: draft-ietf-detnet-pof-06
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2023-11-16
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-22
IESG Telechat date: ?

Summary:

This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Issues: None