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Re: [Detnet] [spring] Comments on draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases

Tarek Saad <tsaad.net@gmail.com> Thu, 24 February 2022 13:52 UTC

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From: Tarek Saad <tsaad.net@gmail.com>
To: Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
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Hi Greg,

Thanks for your comments. I’ve addressed several of your comments. The latest diffs (revision to be uploaded soon) can be found at:
https://tools.ietf.org//rfcdiff?url1=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases-00.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tsaad-dev/drafts/master/miad-usecases/draft-dt-mpls-miad-usecases.txt<https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases-00.txt&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/tsaad-dev/drafts/master/miad-usecases/draft-dt-mpls-miad-usecases.txt>

Regards,
Tarek (for co-authors)

From: spring <spring-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com>
Date: Friday, February 18, 2022 at 4:15 PM
To: draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases@ietf.org <draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases@ietf.org>, mpls <mpls@ietf.org>, pals@ietf.org <pals@ietf.org>, DetNet WG <detnet@ietf.org>, spring <spring@ietf.org>
Subject: [spring] Comments on draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases
Dear Authors,
thank you for your work putting this document together. It helps to analyze essential use cases in the scope of the work at the Open DT. Attached, please find a copy of the draft with my notes and some editorial suggestions. I hope you'll find some of them helpful.
I am looking forward to your feedback and questions.

Regards,
Greg

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