Re: [Detnet] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Robert,

Many thanks for your comments. I see your point, this is unfortunately a side-effect of covering 
the DetNet data plane in multiple dedicated documents.
We have referred to YANG and OAM in the IP and the MPLS data plane documents. In order to 
avoid inconsistency (as You have recognized the issue as well) they were not added in this 
document. 
So, I would keep the document in its current form.

Many thanks
Bala'zs



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Subject: Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: (with COMMENT)

Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-mpls-over-udp-ip-07: No Objection

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I would like to thank the authors for this easy to read and understand document, and also thank Dan for his OPSDIR review.

Related to Dan's question on the manageability section, as a non blocking comment, I wonder whether it would be helpful to have informational references to either the Detnet YANG model or the Detnet OAM documents?  This might be helpful to future readers when they are relating the suite of Detnet documents together.  However, I appreciate that this would create forward references to those documents and will leave it to the discretion of the authors (and responsible AD) to decide whether such references would be helpful here.  It would also be worth noting that adding such references may also create an inconsistency with the other Detnet documents currently in the RFC editor queue unless they also have similar references added.

Regards,
Rob