Re: [Detnet] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com> Wed, 17 February 2021 04:37 UTC

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From: Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 16 Feb 2021 20:36:55 -0800
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: (with COMMENT)
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On Tue, Feb 16, 2021 at 7:48 AM Balázs Varga A
<balazs.a.varga@ericsson.com> wrote:
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> Hi Erik,
>
> Many thanks for your review.
> Proposal regarding your comments is below.
>
> Thanks
> Bala'zs
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
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> Subject: Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: (with COMMENT)
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> Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-detnet-tsn-vpn-over-mpls-06: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> [[ comments ]]
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> * I know that RFC 8964 doesn't have any text about MTU and fragmentation
>   considerations, but RFC 3985 does.
>
>   The layering diagram in section 4.2 made me thing it might be worth
>   either adding some text or pointing to some text elsewhere that
>   advises the DetNet network operator to make sure that all the DetNet
>   encapsulation overhead plus the MTU of the TSN not exceed the DetNet
>   network's MTU, otherwise fragmentation considerations arise.
>
>   Even a reference to RFC 3985 section 5.3 might be enough to remind the
>   reader of these additional considerations.
>
> <Bala'zs> Yes, a note is definitely worth to add (to the end of section 4.2).
> NEW TEXT
>   Note: In order to avoid fragmentation (see section 5.3 of [RFC3985]),
>   the network operator has to make sure that all the DetNet encapsulation
>   overhead plus the TSN App-flow do not exceed the DetNet network's MTU.
> END

Sounds good, thank you!