Re: [Detnet] WG adoption poll: draft-liu-detnet-large-scale-requirements-05

Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 21 November 2022 05:52 UTC

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From: Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 21 Nov 2022 05:51:26 +0000
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Subject: Re: [Detnet] WG adoption poll: draft-liu-detnet-large-scale-requirements-05
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Hi Janos, Authors,

I support adoption of this I-D.

I request authors to do a good editorial pass as the I-D as it can be hard
to read at times. There are some phrases that are "marketing" [1] and thus
not appropriate for RFC. Also since this would be an archival document,
consider adding "at the time of publication" when stating current numbers
[2] as they are likely to be outdated at some point.

Please enhance section 6 [3]!

Thanks!
Dhruv

[1] As an example ->

   Since TSN and DetNet were proposed, application use cases have always
   been one of the hottest topics.  After years of development, TSN has
   been used in several industries, and has enough public awareness of
   the industry for its scope.  DetNet also has done a lot of work and
   the standards are mature, and people become concerned about how to

   meet deterministic service demand in large-scale networks.

[2] As an example ->

Current deterministic mechanisms used in a local
   network is usually deployed in link speed of 10 Mbps or 1 Gbps, or
   possibly 10 Gbps.


The speed of optical transmission in fiber is 200 km/
   ms.


[3] 6.  Security Considerations

   There are no IANA actions required by this document.




On Fri, Oct 28, 2022 at 7:25 PM Janos Farkas <Janos.Farkas=
40ericsson.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

> Hi,
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> This email begins a 3-week adoption poll for:
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-liu-detnet-large-scale-requirements-05
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> Please voice your support or technical objections to adoption on the list
> by the end of the day (any time zone) November 18.
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> Thank you,
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> János (as Co-chair)
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