[Detnet] Comments on draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Fri, 18 February 2022 21:15 UTC

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Subject: [Detnet] Comments on draft-saad-mpls-miad-usecases
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Dear Authors,
thank you for your work putting this document together. It helps to analyze
essential use cases in the scope of the work at the Open DT. Attached,
please find a copy of the draft with my notes and some
editorial suggestions. I hope you'll find some of them helpful.
I am looking forward to your feedback and questions.

Regards,
Greg