[Detnet] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-13: (with COMMENT)

Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 17 December 2020 10:27 UTC

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Subject: [Detnet] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-13: (with COMMENT)
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Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-detnet-flow-information-model-13: No Objection

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I agree with Roman about consistently (not) specifying units.

Section 5.6

Please expand "UNI".

Section 5.9.4

Where is PLR precisely defined?

Section 5.9.6, 6.3.6

Over what time interval is the misordering tolerance measured/applied?

Section 7

I'm not sure what sense the word "applied" (in "applied from the user of
the DeNetService") is being used.  The sentences would parse more easily
if it was supposed to be "supplied", but I'm not 100% that's the
intended meaning.