Re: [dhcwg] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC8357 (6008)

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Yes, the diagram is a bit messed up.

This ERRATA is valid.

- Bernie

-----Original Message-----
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Sent: Thursday, January 28, 2021 5:13 AM
To: bortzmeyer+ietf@nic.fr; naiming@cisco.com; enkechen@cisco.com
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Subject: [dhcwg] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC8357 (6008)

The following errata report has been held for document update for RFC8357, "Generalized UDP Source Port for DHCP Relay". 

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6008

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Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Technical

Reported by: Stéphane Bortzmeyer <bortzmeyer+ietf@nic.fr> Date Reported: 2020-03-05 Held by: Eric Vyncke (IESG)

Section: 4.2

Original Text
-------------
       0                   1                   2                   3
       0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
      |    OPTION_RELAY_PORT    |         Option-Len                  |
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
      |    Downstream Source Port     |
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
 

Corrected Text
--------------
       0                   1                   2                   3
       0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
      |       OPTION_RELAY_PORT       |         Option-Len            |
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+
      |    Downstream Source Port     |
      +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+

Notes
-----
Discrepancy between the diagram and the text noted by draft-mcquistin-augmented-ascii-diagrams-02.

-- Verifier note --
There is clearly an error in the diagram that does not reflect the text. As the text is sensible and used as a reference, implementors will follow the text. Hence, the status of 'hold for document update' as it does not cause significant implementation error.

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RFC8357 (draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port-10)
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Title               : Generalized UDP Source Port for DHCP Relay
Publication Date    : March 2018
Author(s)           : N. Shen, E. Chen
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Dynamic Host Configuration
Area                : Internet
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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