Re: [dhcwg] WGLC on draft-ietf-dhc-v4configuration-04 - respond by Jan. 31

Tomek Mrugalski <tomasz.mrugalski@gmail.com> Sun, 09 February 2014 20:43 UTC

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On 05.02.2014, 22:35, Tomek Mrugalski wrote:
> I have a handful of mostly editorial comments:
I forgot about one procedural comment.

Please remove requirements language ("The key words "MUST", "MUST
NOT"...) and reference to RFC2119. The normative language is appropriate
only for standards track documents.

It is ok to have only informative references.

Tomek