[dhcwg] review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05 chapters 21-26
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Thu, 04 August 2016 13:45 UTC
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Subject: [dhcwg] review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05 chapters 21-26
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Here is the review of draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05 chapter 21 (was chapter 23 in RFC 3315) Security Considerations to chapter 26 References pages 115-124 - 22 Privacy page 117: I suggest said -> that in "It particular, Section 3 of said document discuss various" Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr PS: note if the section 25 (acknowledgments) becomes too large perhaps it should be split into 2 parts, one inherited from RFC 3315 (with RFC 3633 merged as it is now), one with the new stuff.
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