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Re: [dhcwg] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-07: (with COMMENT)

Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com> Thu, 13 August 2020 10:57 UTC

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From: Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2020 20:57:10 +1000
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Robert,

On Thu, Aug 13, 2020, 8:42 PM Robert Wilton via Datatracker <
noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

> Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-07: No Objection
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> Hi,
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> Thank you for your work on this document, I found it easy to read.
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> I have a few minor comments/nits that may help improve this document:
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> Minor comments:
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> Would it be helpful for the the term dual-stack need to be defined (or the
> definition imported)?
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>     6.  Security Considerations
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>     ... could be considered a security feature.
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> Perhaps better for the security ADs to comment, but I wasn't sure whether
> this
> is so much a security feature, or instead just reducing the possible attack
> surface.
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How about ' could be considered a security feature as it reduces the attack
surface' ?


> Nits:
> "such approach" => "such an approach"
> "IPv6-Only" => "IPv6-only"? (for consistency with other terms)
> "operate in IPv6-only network" => "operate in an IPv6-only network"
> "Strictly speaking IPv6-only ... " => "More precisely, IPv6-only ..."
> " ... declaring a host or (strictly speaking, a host interface) IPv6-only
> capable ..." =>  "... declaring a host (technically, a host interface) as
> IPv6-only capable ..." "Hypothetically it" => "Hypothetically, it" "in
> IPv6-only environment" => "in an IPv6-only environment" "via NAT64
> service" =>
> "via a NAT64 service"
>

Thanks, will fix in -08.
Sorry, responding from my phone but I'll update the GitHub version the
first thing tomorrow.

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