Re: [dhcwg] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11
Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com> Tue, 30 April 2024 19:37 UTC
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From: Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 01 May 2024 05:36:59 +1000
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To: Jim Reid <jim@rfc1035.com>
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11
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Hi Jim, On Tue, Apr 30, 2024 at 11:54 PM Jim Reid via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > One problem remains IMO. Section 6 still mentions ownership of an IP address. > This is wrong. It's also inappropriate language for an IETF standards document. > IP addresses are not property and therefore they cannot be owned. > > I suggest changing > > "This prevents a host from registering an address owned by another host." > > to > > "This prevents a host from registering an address already used by (or assigned > to) another host." How about "configured on" ? -- Cheers, Jen Linkova
- [dhcwg] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dhc… Jim Reid via Datatracker
- Re: [dhcwg] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf… Jen Linkova
- Re: [dhcwg] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf… Jim Reid
- [dhcwg] Re: Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf… Li HUANG