Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-11.txt

ianfarrer@gmx.com Wed, 17 June 2020 14:46 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-11.txt
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Hi,

I’ve just posted an update to the DHCPv6 YANG module. The main changes in this version:

*  Added if-feature to prefix delegation notification to resolve a lint dependancy problem

*  Fixes to line lengths in yang modules throughout

*  Updated references to RFC8415, removing the obsoleted references.

*  Removed portset-params (no longer needed)

*  Added text to the Security Considerations section

*  Reworked the interface and address configuration section of the example server module

*  Updated class selector example in line with changes to other models (augmentation path changes)

*  Renamed notifications

*  Relocated the active-leases sub-tree to the correct location.

*  Wording and description cleanup. Changes to re-align text with updates to the nodes in yang modules

*  Removed mandatory true nodes in server resource config 

*  Simplified the example server config file in the Appendix removing Cassandra config and improving the way that access to remote databases are configured.

As ever, all reviews, comments or suggestions appreciated.

Thanks,
Ian 



> On 17. Jun 2020, at 16:44, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Dynamic Host Configuration WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : YANG Data Model for DHCPv6 Configuration
>        Authors         : Yong Cui
>                          Linhui Sun
>                          Ian Farrer
>                          Sladjana Zechlin
>                          Zihao He
>                          Michal Nowikowski
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-11.txt
> 	Pages           : 78
> 	Date            : 2020-06-17
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document describes several YANG data modules for the
>   configuration and management of DHCPv6 servers, relays, and clients.
> 
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang/
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