Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-problem-statement-of-mredhcpv6-01.txt

Lin He <helin1170@gmail.com> Fri, 11 October 2019 09:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-problem-statement-of-mredhcpv6-01.txt
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Hi, all

We've submitted a new draft.

This version updates the DHCP general model with external inputs, deletes
section 4.2.5 "Extension Principles",  and instead adds some description
sentences in the introduction.

Hope you could review the draft and give some comments. Thanks a lot.

<internet-drafts@ietf.org> 于2019年10月11日周五 下午4:12写道:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Dynamic Host Configuration WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Problem Statement of Multi-requirement
> Extensions for Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol for IPv6 (DHCPv6)
>         Authors         : Gang Ren
>                           Lin He
>                           Ying Liu
>         Filename        :
> draft-ietf-dhc-problem-statement-of-mredhcpv6-01.txt
>         Pages           : 11
>         Date            : 2019-10-11
>
> Abstract:
>    The manageability, security, privacy protection, and traceability of
>    networks can be supported by extending DHCPv6 protocol according to
>    requirements.  This document analyzes current extension practices and
>    typical DHCP server software on extensions, defines a DHCP general
>    model, discusses some extension points, and present extension cases.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dhc-problem-statement-of-mredhcpv6/
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> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dhc-problem-statement-of-mredhcpv6-01
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dhc-problem-statement-of-mredhcpv6-01
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dhc-problem-statement-of-mredhcpv6-01
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*   Lin He*