Re: [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (6008)
Megan Ferguson <mferguson@amsl.com> Mon, 16 March 2020 04:57 UTC
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (6008)
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Hi Bernie, Apologies for the much-delayed reply. We went ahead and edited this report as we believe you intended. Please review and confirm. https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6008 Thank you. RFC Editor/mf On Mar 5, 2020, at 2:32 PM, Bernie Volz (volz) <volz@cisco.com> wrote: > The change to the diagram seems to have happened during the RFC process (the -10 draft has the correct diagram). > > I don't recall how we can handle errata and whether it is better to "cancel" the current one and substitute a different one that has the correct text, as follows: > > The incorrect "diagram" is in Section 4.2: > > 0 1 2 3 > 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > | OPTION_RELAY_PORT | Option-Len | > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > | Downstream Source Port | > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > The correct diagram (from draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port-10 after updating the option name which is what I think caused the issue): > > 0 1 2 3 > 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 0 1 > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > | OPTION_RELAY_PORT | Option-Len | > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > | Downstream Source Port | > +-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+-+ > > Note: You need to assure that the diagrams are in a fixed space font (such as Courier New). > > As per RFC8415, the option code (OPTION_RELAY_PORT) and option length fields (Option-Len) are both 16-bits – seehttps://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8415#section-21.1). > > • Bernie > > -----Original Message----- > From: Bernie Volz (volz) > Sent: Thursday, March 5, 2020 7:05 AM > To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> > Cc: naiming@cisco.com; Enke Chen (enkechen) <enkechen@cisco.com>; suresh@kaloom.com; Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke@cisco.com>; tomasz.mrugalski@gmail.com; bortzmeyer+ietf@nic.fr; dhcwg@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (6008) > > The diagram is a bit off, but the text is correct that option-code and option-len are both 16-bits. > > We can log errata that diagram is broken, but the text is correct. > > - Bernie > > > On Mar 5, 2020, at 6:08 AM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8357, > > "Generalized UDP Source Port for DHCP Relay". > > > > -------------------------------------- > > You may review the report below and at: > > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6008 > > > > -------------------------------------- > > Type: Technical > > Reported by: Stéphane Bortzmeyer <bortzmeyer+ietf@nic.fr> > > > > Section: 4.2 > > > > Original Text > > ------------- > > Option-Code: OPTION_RELAY_PORT. 16-bit value, 135. > > > > Option-Len: 16-bit value to be set to 2. > > > > Corrected Text > > -------------- > > Option-Code: OPTION_RELAY_PORT. 13-bit value, 135. > > > > Option-Len: 19-bit value to be set to 2. > > > > Notes > > ----- > > Discrepancy between the diagram and the text noted by > > draft-mcquistin-augmented-ascii-diagrams-02 > > > > Instructions: > > ------------- > > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. > > When a decision is reached, the verifying party can log in to change > > the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > > > -------------------------------------- > > RFC8357 (draft-ietf-dhc-relay-port-10) > > -------------------------------------- > > Title : Generalized UDP Source Port for DHCP Relay > > Publication Date : March 2018 > > Author(s) : N. Shen, E. Chen > > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > > Source : Dynamic Host Configuration > > Area : Internet > > Stream : IETF > > Verifying Party : IESG > > > > _______________________________________________ > > dhcwg mailing list > > dhcwg@ietf.org > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcwg
- [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (6008) RFC Errata System
- Re: [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (… Bernie Volz (volz)
- Re: [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (… Bernie Volz (volz)
- Re: [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (… Megan Ferguson
- Re: [dhcwg] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8357 (… Bernie Volz (volz)