Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-22.txt

[tom petch <[e-mail]>]

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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-22.txt

Hi,

I’ve just posted an update which addresses Tom’s most recent comments, plus some additional fixes and optimisations, listed below. With this update, I think the draft is ready for WGLC.

<tp>

Looks good at first sight.

Tom Petch


Thanks,
Ian

Changes in this version:

* For examples where an Enterprise number is needed, 32473 is now used, per Tom’s comment. The example XML no longer contains two instances of the vendor specific information option.

* http has been replaced with https, per Tom’s comment.

* Ia-na and ia-ta (as wall as ia-pd) are now enabled by features in the client module. This allows for clients that don’t support ia-ta (e.g. ISC) and also stateless DHCP client configuration.

* Status code option has been removed from configuration as there is no case that this should be configured. In it’s place, a status group is used by the operational nodes to store the last status code/message that has been sent (server) or received (client)

* The relay now does not have any status code information. I’m not aware of any cases where the relay should generate or store status codes for e.g. a pd-lease, but would appreciate feedback if this is incorrect.

* Client lease information common nodes are now a group to avoid duplication.

* Changed high level order in modules to put rpcs before notifications as per RFC8407.

* Changed all rpcs and notifications to use relative paths in their leafrefs (some were absolute)

* Changed the option set example XML to illustrate how new option definitions can be augmented, using the SIP domain name option example from Appendix B.


> On 2. Jul 2021, at 14:37, [e-mail] wrote:
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Dynamic Host Configuration WG of the IETF.
>
>        Title           : YANG Data Model for DHCPv6 Configuration
>        Author          : Ian Farrer
>       Filename        : draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-22.txt
>       Pages           : 102
>       Date            : 2021-07-02
>
> Abstract:
>   This document describes YANG data modules for the configuration and
>   management of DHCPv6 (Dynamic Host Configuration Protocol for IPv6)
>   servers, relays, and clients.
>
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-22
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-22
>
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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