[dhcwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11
Mallory Knodel via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 07 May 2024 17:31 UTC
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Date: Fri, 10 May 2024 21:59:14 -0000
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Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-?? Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review Date: 2024-05-07 IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-30 IESG Telechat date: 2024-05-16 Summary: This document is well written and clear. Major issues: None. Minor issues: None. Nits/editorial comments: Two very brief spelling/grammar replacements: s/re-start/restart s/IA-Address/IA Address
- [dhcwg] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc… Mallory Knodel via Datatracker
- [dhcwg] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf… Jen Linkova