Re: [dhcwg] WGLC on draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05 - respond by August 8th

tianxiang li <peter416733@gmail.com> Fri, 29 July 2016 06:42 UTC

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From: tianxiang li <peter416733@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 29 Jul 2016 14:41:25 +0800
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] WGLC on draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05 - respond by August 8th
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A few quick comments below:

Throughout the document, “IAPREFIX option” and “IA Prefix option” are both
used (e.g. section 17.1.9.), should there be a unified expression?
Currently, draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-prefix-length-hint-issue uses the term
“IAPREFIX option” should we change it to “IA Prefix option”?

Some wording errors for Section 22 privacy considerations:

"This section focuses on the server considerations. For extended discussion
about privacy considerations for the client, see [RFC7824].
It(In) particular, Section 3 of said(the) document discuss(discusses)
various identifiers that could be misused to track the client."

Cheers,
Tianxiang

2016-07-09 1:03 GMT+08:00 Tomek Mrugalski <tomasz.mrugalski@gmail.com>om>:

> Hi all,
>
> So the day finally has come. Authors working on RFC3315bis believe that
> after over two years of work, this document is ready for working group
> last call. This call initiates the working group last call on
> draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05 [1]. Since this is a large document (130+
> pages), there's upcoming meeting and a holiday period, chairs decided to
> do an extended last call that will last 4 weeks. Please post your
> comments by August 8th.
>
> We do have a slot reserved for this work in Berlin. We will present the
> overview of the document (some areas are organized differently than
> original 3315), go over the most important changes and will discuss any
> comments raised to date.
>
> If you would like to review more important changes, looking at
> appendices A anb B seems like a good place to start. If you like to see
> the list of tickets addressed, see [2]. Many smaller issues were
> discussed on dhcpv6bis mailing list [3].
>
> This is the most important document the DHC working group is currently
> working on. Please review it thoroughly. Since both co-chairs are also
> co-authors, our shepherd, Ralph Droms, will determine consensus and wrap
> up the WGLC. Thank you Ralph for stepping up and helping with this!
>
> 1. https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dhc-rfc3315bis-05
> 2. https://tools.ietf.org/group/dhcpv6bis/
> 3. https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/dhcpv6bis
>
> Cheers,
> Bernie & Tomek
>
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