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Re: [dhcwg] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-07: (with COMMENT)

Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com> Wed, 12 August 2020 21:54 UTC

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From: Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 13 Aug 2020 07:53:57 +1000
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To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Roman,

On Wed, Aug 12, 2020 at 10:24 PM Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
<noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> A few editorial nits:
>
> -- Section 3.3.1.  Editorial. “w/o” --> “without”

Fixed.

> -- Section 3.3.1.  Editorial.
> OLD
> Therefore the
>    following update is proposed to Section 2.3 of [RFC2563]"
> NEW
> Therefore, the following update is made to Section 2.3 of [RFC2563].
>
> -- Section 3.4  Please review the SECDIR review for revised text on V6ONLY_WAIT
> (and thank you Russ Housley for doing the review)

Oops, thanks for pointing this out - I did fix the normative part of
the comment but missed that editorial comment.
Also Benjamin's comment about the word 'minimum' in the definition is
now addressed.

Proof link: https://github.com/furry13/v6only-dhc/commit/f38d12bdcba79d7471a055040ac83112144ef75b#diff-8bd8b06927b9093ad11128f72a76583c
;)
The changes will be integrated in -08.


-- 
SY, Jen Linkova aka Furry

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