[dhcwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05

Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Thu, 04 October 2018 15:31 UTC

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Subject: [dhcwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05

Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcp4o6-saddr-opt-05
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2018-10-04
IETF LC End Date: 2018-09-07
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11

Summary:
Ready. Thanks for addressing my comments from the last call review. There are a
couple of remaining trivial nits.

Major issues:
None.

Minor issues:
None.

Nits/editorial comments:
S7.5 , para 2: s/The default time minimum time/The default minimum time/

s10:  I missed a third instance where the following change ought to be made
(sorry): OLD: in the table at
https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: NEW: in the Option Codes
table at https://www.iana.org/assignments/dhcpv6-parameters: ENDS

[dhcwg] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-… Elwyn Davies
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