Re: [dhcwg] Some comments regarding draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-01

Marcin Siodelski <msiodelski@gmail.com> Mon, 29 July 2013 11:18 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Some comments regarding draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-01
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On Mon, Jul 29, 2013 at 10:06 AM, Qi Sun <sunqi.csnet.thu@gmail.com> wrote:

> How about the following text:
>
> "... the message is valid for constructing a new Relay-forward message if
> a relay agent receives the message, but the relay agent does not identify
> itself as the target of the message, and the message is not a Relay-Reply
> message."
>
> Is the usage of 'target' here is precise?
>
> Yes. It sounds much clearer now.