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Re: [dhcwg] Request for review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt

Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com> Tue, 17 December 2013 01:02 UTC

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Hi, authors,

Thanks for addressing my comments. This version looks good for me.

Regards,

Sheng

From: dhcwg [mailto:dhcwg-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Qi Sun
Sent: Monday, December 16, 2013 12:33 PM
To: dhcwg@ietf.org WG
Subject: [dhcwg] Request for review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt


Dear all,

Please can you review draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04 to see if this version has addressed your concerns.
Many thanks!

Best Regards,
Qi

On 2013-12-16, at 上午11:30, Qi Sun wrote:


Dear all,

We have updated the draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg. Major changes are:

1) Update the Sec 3 (Problem Statement)
2) Rename the Sec 4.1 to "A Valid Message for Constructing a New Relay-forward Message" to avoid the confusion about what 'valid' is for.
3) Reword the definition to the 'valid' message and the subsequent paragraph about unknown messages targeting at the relay agent.
4) Choose "toward" among "toward/towards/to" when describing the relaying direction.
5) Use the pre-RFC5378 boilerplate.
6) Correct some nits.

Thanks a lot for your inputs during the WGLC.

Best Regards,
Qi


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Date: 2013年12月16日 上午11时25分37秒格林尼治标准时间+0800
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Subject: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Dynamic Host Configuration Working Group of the IETF.

   Title           : Handling Unknown DHCPv6 Messages
   Author(s)       : Yong Cui
                         Qi Sun
                         Ted Lemon
   Filename        : draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt
   Pages           : 6
   Date            : 2013-12-15

Abstract:
  DHCPv6 is not specific about handling messages with unknown types.
  This memo describes the problems and defines how a DHCPv6 server,
  client or relay agent should behave when receiving unknown DHCPv6
  messages.  This document updates RFC3315.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg

There's also a htmlized version available at:
http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04

A diff from the previous version is available at:
http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04


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