[dhcwg] Request for review on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt

Qi Sun <sunqi.csnet.thu@gmail.com> Mon, 16 December 2013 04:33 UTC

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Dear all,
 
Please can you review draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04 to see if this version has addressed your concerns. 
Many thanks!

Best Regards,
Qi 


On 2013-12-16, at 上午11:30, Qi Sun wrote:

> Dear all,
> 
> We have updated the draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg. Major changes are: 
> 
> 1) Update the Sec 3 (Problem Statement)
> 2) Rename the Sec 4.1 to "A Valid Message for Constructing a New Relay-forward Message" to avoid the confusion about what 'valid' is for.
> 3) Reword the definition to the 'valid' message and the subsequent paragraph about unknown messages targeting at the relay agent.
> 4) Choose "toward" among "toward/towards/to" when describing the relaying direction.
> 5) Use the pre-RFC5378 boilerplate.
> 6) Correct some nits.
> 
> Thanks a lot for your inputs during the WGLC. 
> 
> Best Regards,
> Qi
> 
> 
> Begin forwarded message:
> 
>> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org
>> Date: 2013年12月16日 上午11时25分37秒格林尼治标准时间+0800
>> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
>> Cc: dhcwg@ietf.org
>> Subject: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt
>> 
>> 
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Dynamic Host Configuration Working Group of the IETF.
>> 
>> 	Title           : Handling Unknown DHCPv6 Messages
>> 	Author(s)       : Yong Cui
>>                          Qi Sun
>>                          Ted Lemon
>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04.txt
>> 	Pages           : 6
>> 	Date            : 2013-12-15
>> 
>> Abstract:
>>   DHCPv6 is not specific about handling messages with unknown types.
>>   This memo describes the problems and defines how a DHCPv6 server,
>>   client or relay agent should behave when receiving unknown DHCPv6
>>   messages.  This document updates RFC3315.
>> 
>> 
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg
>> 
>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04
>> 
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-unknown-msg-04
>> 
>> 
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