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Re: [dhcwg] Attempt at text for draft-ietf-dhc-lifetime-02

Stig Venaas <Stig.Venaas@uninett.no> Fri, 27 August 2004 11:43 UTC

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Date: Fri, 27 Aug 2004 13:32:39 +0200
From: Stig Venaas <Stig.Venaas@uninett.no>
To: matthew.ford@bt.com
Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Attempt at text for draft-ietf-dhc-lifetime-02
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On Fri, Aug 27, 2004 at 11:46:41AM +0100, matthew.ford@bt.com wrote:
> Hi Stig,
> 
> > I've tried to update the text based on all the suggestions and
> > comments received. I may still try to improve the language, but
> > please read the text below and let me know if you have problems
> > with what it says. Lines from the draft are prefixed by "|". I
> > have some comments/questions inline. I'm hoping that we can come
> > to agreement on the text in 1-2 weeks, so that I can finalize
> > version 02, which then hopefully can go to WGLC.
> > 
> > 
> >>              Information Refresh Time Option for DHCPv6
> > 
> > What do you think of this name? I think the problem with just
> > "refresh time option" is that it sounds more like an option for
> > refreshing time... 
> 
> I think if you hyphenate Refresh-Time then the meaning is clearer.

Yes, I agree, and I was about to do that, until I checked with my local
linguist friend. At least he claimed it was no good...

Thanks,

Stig

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