Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-01.txt

Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com> Mon, 01 June 2020 00:04 UTC

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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] I-D Action: draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-01.txt
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First of all, thanks to everyone who read the draft and provided their comments.
Post-WGLC -01 version has just been submitted.

Changes since -00:
1) The Abstract and the Introduction sections have explicitly mention
RFC2563 update.
2) A definition of 'IPv4-requiring host' is added to the Terminology section
3) (most important one, probably): Instead of saying that the client
MUST NOT request an address provided by the server (if the server
decided to offer a real address, not 0.0.0.0) , the draft is now
saying 'SHOULD NOT'.
4) some text polishing/typo fixing

On Mon, Jun 1, 2020 at 9:49 AM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Dynamic Host Configuration WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : IPv6-Only-Preferred Option for DHCP
>         Authors         : Lorenzo Colitti
>                           Jen Linkova
>                           Michael C. Richardson
>                           Tomek Mrugalski
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-01.txt
>         Pages           : 13
>         Date            : 2020-05-31
>
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies a DHCP option to indicate that a host
>    supports an IPv6-only mode and willing to forgo obtaining an IPv4
>    address if the network provides IPv6 connectivity.  It also updates
>    [RFC2563] to specify the DHCP server behavior when the server
>    receives a DHCPDISCOVER not containing the Auto-Configure option.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dhc-v6only/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-01
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-01
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