Re: [dhcwg] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24: (with COMMENT)

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Thread-Topic: [dhcwg] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray,

RFC 3319 does not need to be listed as normative as it is cited in an example module. 

RFC 8987 is OK to be cited as informative given that it does only specify a requirement. It does not specify the inputs/outputs. That's consistent with rfc8407#section-3.9:

   If the reference statement identifies an informative reference that
   identifies a separate document, a corresponding informative reference
   to that document MAY appear in the Informative References section. 

BTW, the I-D has to cite 8987 in the core text. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : dhcwg <dhcwg-bounces@ietf.org> De la part de Murray Kucherawy via
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> Envoyé : mercredi 15 décembre 2021 16:56
> À : The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc : dhc-chairs@ietf.org; draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang@ietf.org;
> dhcwg@ietf.org
> Objet : [dhcwg] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-
> yang-24: (with COMMENT)
> 
> Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-yang-24: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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> I suggest breaking Section 6 into two subsections, one for each batch of
> registry operations.
> 
> A possibly ignorant question about YANG modules: Since RFCs 3319 and 8987
> are referenced from within the module itself, shouldn't they be normative
> references?
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