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[dhcwg] Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-11

Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com> Wed, 08 May 2024 13:49 UTC

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Date: Tue, 21 May 2024 17:27:20 -0000
X-Original-Date: Wed, 8 May 2024 23:49:05 +1000

Hi Mallory,

Thank you for pointing those typos out, they will be fixed in the next
version of the draft.

On Wed, May 8, 2024 at 3:31 AM Mallory Knodel via Datatracker
<noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>.
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> Document: draft-ietf-dhc-addr-notification-??
> Reviewer: Mallory Knodel
> Review Date: 2024-05-07
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-04-30
> IESG Telechat date: 2024-05-16
>
> Summary: This document is well written and clear.
>
> Major issues: None.
>
> Minor issues: None.
>
> Nits/editorial comments:
>
> Two very brief spelling/grammar replacements:
>
> s/re-start/restart
> s/IA-Address/IA Address
>
>
>


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Cheers, Jen Linkova

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