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Re: [dhcwg] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-06: (with COMMENT)

Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com> Sun, 09 August 2020 09:15 UTC

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From: Jen Linkova <furry13@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 09 Aug 2020 19:14:51 +1000
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To: Erik Kline <ek.ietf@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [dhcwg] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-dhc-v6only-06: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Erik for reviewing!

On Sun, Aug 9, 2020 at 10:43 AM Erik Kline via Datatracker
<noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> [ section 5 ]
>
> * Consider redoing the table to instead match the columns in the registry.
>
>   Perhaps:
>
>       Tag: TBD
>       Name: IPv6-only Preferred option
>       Data Length: 4
>       Meaning: IPv6-only Preferred option
>       Reference: [THIS-RFC]

Updated (well, will be updated in -07):

Tag: TBD (proposed value: 108
Name: IPv6-only Preferred option
Data Length: 4
Meaning: Number of seconds to disable DHCPv4 for
Reference: draft-ietf-dhc-v6only

> [[ nits ]]
>
> [ section 3.2 ]
>
> * Perhaps s/per interface enabled basis/per enabled interface basis/
>
> [ section 3.3 ]
>
> * s/assign an address for the pool/assign an address from the pool/

Fixed, thanks!

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